Template:Did you know nominations/Michigan–Michigan State ice hockey rivalry

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PanydThe muffin is not subtle 15:24, 25 November 2011 (UTC)

Michigan–Michigan State ice hockey rivalry edit

Created/expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 20:21, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

  • Creation date is OK. The first paragraph of the article, which contains the hook facts, is not sourced at all and needs to be. It would also be good if the article were expanded a little more. The number of characters is greater than 1500, but the first two sentences are very long and don't have much to do with the hockey teams. - PM800 (talk) 22:07, 22 November 2011 (UTC)
  • It's OK now. - PM800 (talk) 19:38, 23 November 2011 (UTC)