- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 16:36, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
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Medingen Abbey
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- ... that the nuns of Medingen Abbey (pictured) produced an astonishing wealth of illuminated manuscripts in which they expanded Latin liturgy with vernacular prayers, lay-songs and meditations for themselves and for local German noblewomen?
Created by Jenny.lemke (talk). Nominated by Bermicourt (talk) at 16:27, 5 June 2013 (UTC).
- For article: Date is good, length is good, within policy as far as I can tell. I fixed some grammar and word usage in the article, as well as cut down on excess word usage.
For hook: Interesting, but seems a little wordy. Also has unnecessary ellipsis after the word "that". I might suggest changing to:
... that the nuns of Medingen Abbey (pictured) produced a wealth of illuminated manuscripts in which they expanded Latin liturgy with vernacular prayers, lay-songs and meditations?
Or consider an alternative hook:
... that the Protestant Reformation was supposed to be introduced in Medingen Abbey (pictured) in 1524, but it was met with resistance from the nuns?
Overall, it seems completely acceptable as a DYK. I hope this has been at all helpful (this was my first DYK review so I hope I've done it correctly). Samuel Peoples (talk) 18:06, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
- Comment. I'm happy with either of the first two options.
- Question. Do we want to offer the image as well? --Bermicourt (talk) 19:32, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
- The image seems like a good one to me. I don't think it could hurt to include it. Samuel Peoples (talk) 05:31, 6 June 2013 (UTC)
Forgot to include this little icon. The article and hook seem good to go. Samuel Peoples (talk) 09:33, 6 June 2013 (UTC)
- The image seems like a good one to me. I don't think it could hurt to include it. Samuel Peoples (talk) 05:31, 6 June 2013 (UTC)
