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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:24, 11 August 2014 (UTC)

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  • ... that Lyca Gairanod, the first grand champion of The Voice Kids, formerly helps her mother find for recyclable materials to sell just so they would have enough money?

Created by PapaJeckloy (talk). Self nominated at 09:18, 2 August 2014 (UTC).

  • This article long enough, but it needs significant copyediting. Many parts of the article are not supported by sources. It also needs an expanded/rewritten opening paragraph to summarize the article.
  • The sources in the article (#3 and #4) don't clearly support the hook.
  • The hook above needs to be rewritten; at the very least, it needs to be changed to the past tense.Prburley (talk) 23:54, 4 August 2014 (UTC)
    • citation3 and citation4 are now supported because on hook 4 , Gairanod revealed the she is not forced by her mother to find recyclable materials, she just want to do it so she could help them and for supplying her allowance, the citation 4 says it on Filipino "Hindi po ako pinipilit ng nanay ko mangalakal, pero ginusto ko po para may baon po kami," the kid said. she said it on Filipino and the statement above is the English translation of it. I have improved the opening paragraph, and this is an alternate hook that is fixed.
    • Hook is supported by reference. Article needs a lot of proofreading; I'm going to start now.Prburley (talk) 19:32, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
  • Proofreading going very slowly. Have only finished one section so far. I may need some clarification at points as certain things are quite confusing.Prburley (talk) 15:31, 7 August 2014 (UTC)

ALT2:... that before Lyca Gairanod won The Voice Kids, she helped her mother find for recyclable materials to sell just so they would have enough money? --PAPAJECKLOY (hearthrob! kiss me! <3) (talk) 08:14, 5 August 2014 (UTC).

ALT3:... that before Lyca Gairanod won The Voice Kids, she helped her mother find recyclable materials to sell to support their family?

It looks good to me, it's what I wrote, but I'll pass it on to another editor to see if it's good to go or not.Prburley (talk) 15:29, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
  • Everything's fine and it's ready, Good to go, as Pburley said. Gongon3336 (talk) 08:39, 10 August 2014 (UTC)
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