- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:22, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
Lisbeth Hockey
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Created by Drchriswilliams (talk). Self-nominated at 23:49, 15 October 2016 (UTC).
| General: Article is new enough and long enough
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| Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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| Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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Regarding which hook should be used, I'd go the RCPG hook as it is more interesting and 'important' in comparison to being one of the first. It'd be good to change the first two sentences under Early life as the repetition of "she" doesn't make it flow as well as it could, small parts are close to the source (but not enough for there to be able a problem here. Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 11:49, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Callanecc: I added some further material to the early life and nursing career sections of this article. Drchriswilliams (talk) 20:03, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
Regarding which hook should be used, I'd go the RCPG hook as it is more interesting and 'important' in comparison to being one of the first. It'd be good to change the first two sentences under Early life as the repetition of "she" doesn't make it flow as well as it could, small parts are close to the source (but not enough for there to be able a problem here. Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 11:49, 17 October 2016 (UTC)