Template:Did you know nominations/Lindsay Doran

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:10, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

Lindsay Doran edit

Moved to mainspace by Ruby2010 (talk). Self nominated at 17:39, 17 June 2013 (UTC).

  • New, long enough, within policy, QPQ good, BLP tagged. (Article needs some copy editing esp. for hyphenations and verb tense, consider listing it at GOCE.) Article is very well-written. Excellent job. The "grew up" part of hook wasn't verified in article source, so removed. Edited the first hook a bit. Both hooks are good and check out. (Second is 200 characters on the dot.) I prefer the second. czar · · 04:56, 19 June 2013 (UTC)