Template:Did you know nominations/Khasi Katha– A Goat Saga

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 10:07, 9 February 2013 (UTC)

Khasi Katha– A Goat Saga

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... that in the upcoming Bengali film Khasi Katha– A Goat Saga, a goat, before it is about to be slaughtered, narrates a story of a woman boxer and her struggle to the butcher?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Fatima (1938 film)
Comment: Most probably it'll not be needed, but, if the DYK hook gets processed in/after March, 2013, replace the word "Upcoming" of the hook with "2013"!

Created/expanded by Titodutta (talk). Self nom at 18:09, 16 January 2013 (UTC)

Created on January 16, prose (not including the lists) is just over 1500 characters, the article is neutral and well sourced. The hook is sourced and certainly interesting however the wording makes it hard to read. Also the guide says that shorter is better. I suggest something like:

ALT1: *... that in the upcoming Bengali film Khasi Katha– A Goat Saga, a goat about to be slaughtered narrates the story of a female boxer to a butcher?

In any case the article is ok to go on the mainpage. James086^Talk 16:44, 8 February 2013 (UTC)

I am okay with ALT1 --Tito Dutta (talk) 17:25, 8 February 2013 (UTC)