Template:Did you know nominations/Kamaishi Recovery Memorial Stadium

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:53, 16 October 2017 (UTC)

Kamaishi Recovery Memorial Stadium edit

Created by SounderBruce (talk). Self-nominated at 06:38, 14 October 2017 (UTC).

  • Article created 14 October by SounderBruce as a translation from the Japanese wiki article; Article exceeds minimum character length; article is generally well sourced, though it could use a citation for the "Unosumai Station" sentence; I didn't notice any close paraphrasing from the English language sources; QPQ done; I prefer the second hook, though I don't think you can say the city was destroyed based on the text in the article, maybe replace with "suffered major damage" or similar? - Dumelow (talk) 11:17, 14 October 2017 (UTC)
    • @Dumelow: I have rewritten the ALT1 hook and added a reference to the sentence about the station. SounderBruce 21:42, 14 October 2017 (UTC)
  • Looks good to me now, AGF on foreign language sources - Dumelow (talk) 22:45, 14 October 2017 (UTC)