Template:Did you know nominations/Jordan Payton

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:44, 1 December 2015 (UTC)

Jordan Payton edit

Created by Bagumba (talk). Self-nominated at 02:00, 22 November 2015 (UTC).

  • The article was new enough and long enough as of the nomination date, and appears to be in good shape overall. The hook fact is appropriately cited, with the relevant content spread across three reliable sources. The only issue I see is that the phrase "caught a long touchdown pass between two defenders" is also found in the source, although I admit this is a tough one to paraphrase well. There were no other referencing issues in the sources I spot-checked (five, counting the three needed for the hook fact). Giants2008 (Talk) 02:19, 29 November 2015 (UTC)
    • @Giants2008: I made these changes. Let me know if you still have concerns. Thanks.—Bagumba (talk) 05:03, 29 November 2015 (UTC)
      • With that change I think this is ready now, as that was the only concern I had. Giants2008 (Talk) 02:03, 30 November 2015 (UTC)