Template:Did you know nominations/Jocelyn Hay

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 19:59, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

Jocelyn Hay edit

Created by Edwardx (talk), CAWylie (talk), Rms125a@hotmail.com (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 22:18, 29 January 2014 (UTC).

  • New enough, long enough, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Hook ref verified and cited inline. I tweaked the hook by adding the name of the newspaper; we can't say she "was the best lobbyist"; it's only one newspaper's opinion. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 01:44, 7 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Suggest moving to holding area for IWD. -- Ohc ¡digame! 03:04, 7 February 2014 (UTC)