- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 04:59, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
Janur Kuning edit
- ... that the titular coconut leaves in the war film Janur Kuning (Yellow Coconut Leaves) are a symbol of struggle?
- ALT1:... that the war film Janur Kuning (Yellow Coconut Leaves) has been read as portraying General Sudirman (pictured) with mystic powers?
- Reviewed: Attribution bias
Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 12:22, 29 December 2012 (UTC)
Length, date verified. No apparent paraphrasing issues. All refs appear to be RS. QPQ done. Interesting hook; its length is ok. Issues: (1) sentence to support hook lacks inline citation; (2) two non-lead paragraphs lack refs. --Rosiestep (talk) 17:02, 30 December 2012 (UTC)
- Per DYKSG D2: "The article in general should use inline, cited sources. A rule of thumb is one inline citation per paragraph, excluding the intro, plot summaries, and paragraphs which summarize other cited content." (emphasis mine). As for the refs, I've duplicated the ref for the original hook; the ALT's ref is already okay — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:16, 30 December 2012 (UTC)
