Template:Did you know nominations/Jacksonville ROAR

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 14:56, 14 February 2012 (UTC)

Jacksonville ROAR edit

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... that rookie cheerleaders from the Jacksonville Roar earn less than $100 for each Jaguars game?

Reviewed: Ralph Dewey

Created/expanded by Mgreason (talk). Self nom at 15:10, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

Nearly there. New enough. Long enough. Checked for plagiarism. One matter to address is that the title doesn't appear to comply with WP:MOS and would be better placed at Jacksonville Roar.

√ Moved as per suggestion.

Regarding the hook, I feel the Jacksonville Business Journal qualifies as a reliable source. The hook is interesting and brilliantly short and is backed up by the citation, but when I went to the link it was page 2 of the article and the cited information is on page 3, so the link should be updated. About the hook, I may be wrong but feel "Jaguars game" would fit better than "Jaguar game", being a game of the Jaguars. QPQ has been completed. Cloudz 679 09:20, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

√ Changed ref to reflect 3rd page of article.

Good to go. Cloudz 679 16:14, 13 February 2012 (UTC)