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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:27, 21 December 2019 (UTC)

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Judith Katzir

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Created by CallMeBarcode (talk). Self-nominated at 14:30, 7 November 2019 (UTC).

  • @Narutolovehinata: I made a mistake, I think, in formatting, because I am relatively new to this. I shouldn't have capitalized the article title. Is there a way for me to delete the entry and start again? Here is the page: Judith Katzir Thanks for your help. CallMeBarcode (talk) 15:43, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
  • @CallMeBarcode: There is no need to move the page. I have reformatted the hook according to what it looks like it's saying. epicgenius (talk) 17:57, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
  • @Epicgenius: Thank you, Epicgenius! I appreciate your help a lot. CallMeBarcode (talk) 18:15, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
ALT1 has potential, but it's a bit on the long side. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:58, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
slightly shortened version.108.16.95.25 (talk) 12:00, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
  • ALT3 ... that the novel Tzilla is based on Judith Katzir's great-grandmother, who lost an eye in a pogrom and invited her lover to live with her and her husband? --evrik (talk) 00:24, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
  • I think you should choose either the lost her eye in a pogrom or invited her lover to live with her and her husband. The latter seems hookiest.
  • ALT3a: ... that the novel Tzilla is based on Judith Katzir's great-grandmother, who invited her lover to live with her and her husband in Palestine?
  • Let me know if you're okay with that and I'll do a full review. Yoninah (talk) 21:22, 8 December 2019 (UTC)
  • That cracks me up -- the "hookiest" version! Yes, I'm OK with it, and many thanks for this excellent suggestion! I have put it below with the source link CallMeBarcode (talk) 21:37, 8 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Thank you, but I don't think "Israeli novel" adds anything to the hook, especially as you mention Palestine at the end. I'm tweaking the hook to make it clear that Katzir is the author:
  • ALT4: ... that the novel Tzilla is based on author Judith Katzir's great-grandmother, who invited her lover to live with her and her husband in Palestine?
  • Here is a full review: New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. ALT4 hook ref verified and cited inline. Image in article is freely licensed. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits. ALT4 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 22:45, 8 December 2019 (UTC)
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