Template:Did you know nominations/Hidden Cave

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 03:20, 18 December 2012 (UTC)

Hidden Cave

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Created by Kreindel (talk), expanded by Utcursch (talk). Nominated by Northamerica1000 (talk) at 06:04, 12 December 2012 (UTC)

  • Very interesting hook but 249 characters, can you make it less than 200? --Tito Dutta (talk) 00:01, 17 December 2012 (UTC)

ALT1*... that Hidden Cave, an archaeological cave site located in the Great Basin near Fallon, Nevada, got its name due its entrance being difficult to find?

The Alt looks great! Just an opinion (not related to any DYK criteria), can you unlink "archaeological" "cave"? Firstly these are common terms, secondly I have seen the more links we add in the hook, the more readers get confused where to click! Anyway, it should be a fine hook, in my opinion! I'll add the DYKTick after seeing your reply about the link comment (if you give any, otherwise I'll tick it within 3 hours of your last edit after my talkback post at your talk page.)--Tito Dutta (talk) 03:20, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
Done. Slightly revised Alt1 above (delinked ""archaeological" and "cave"). Northamerica1000(talk) 03:25, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
The ALT1 looks fine and interesting! You can add User:Utcursch too as expander. --Tito Dutta (talk) 03:30, 17 December 2012 (UTC) typo correction: to→too (shown in green Tito Dutta (talk) 03:32, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
Added User:Utcursch as expander at top. Northamerica1000(talk) 04:27, 17 December 2012 (UTC)