Template:Did you know nominations/Henry Josey

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The result was: rejected by Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:49, 11 October 2011 (UTC)
Withdrawn

Henry Josey

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  • Reviewed: TBD

Created/expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 01:26, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

Hook review
Format Citation Neutrality Interest
Daniel Case (talk) Daniel Case (talk) Daniel Case (talk) To me this both a little dull—someone's always going to be leading this; it just means he's a good running back—and has the potential to be dated by the time it runs. Can we find some way to make this interesting? Daniel Case (talk)


Article review
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Daniel Case (talk) Daniel Case (talk) Daniel Case (talk) Notes 2, 4 and 16 need to have date of source if known; all should have date of access. Note 13 needs to have the date where the other notes do (perhaps {{cite news}} was not used?)Daniel Case (talk) Daniel Case (talk) Daniel Case (talk) Daniel Case (talk)


  • This was not a particularly strong nom on my part. Daniel's point about the hook fact is valid. Can't really see a better hook either. Best to just withdraw this one, which I do. Cbl62 (talk) 05:55, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
  • Also, CBL needs a QPQ review. Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:05, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
  • The nomination was withdrawn last week. Cbl62 (talk) 02:15, 11 October 2011 (UTC)