Template:Did you know nominations/Harendra Singh

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:27, 19 July 2018 (UTC)

Harendra Singh

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Created by Dee03 (talk). Self-nominated at 16:46, 5 July 2018 (UTC).

  •  Doing...-Nizil (talk) 05:51, 10 July 2018 (UTC)
  • Thank you @Dee03: for contributing and nominating article for DYK. Comments: New article. Article is just 1562 characters long. Neutral. Hook is long enough and cited. If you can find more catchy hook, it would be better. Else I will approve this hook. There is unnecessary quote of Rani Rampal in the article which should not be there (I believe that it would be shorten the article below 1500 so please add some additional info from his early life, education and playing career. Expand lead with summary of the article. Article chiefly focuses on coaching career but provides not much on his playing career. If possible, add some info about it.) Dronacharya Award needs citation and it can be a hook too. QPQ pending. Regards,-Nizil (talk) 06:16, 10 July 2018 (UTC)
  • Hi, I have expanded the article a bit and resolved other issues. QPQ is also done now. I couldn't think of a catchier hook than this, so we may go with this. ALT hook suggestions are welcome. Dee03 15:03, 10 July 2018 (UTC)
  • @Nizil Shah: Can you complete the review? Dee03 13:40, 18 July 2018 (UTC)
  • @Dee03:, sorry for the delay. I forgot to recheck. as article is expanded as suggested, changes are done, QPQ done. You may expand about his early life and lead if you want to but for DYK, current state of article is enough so I am approving it. Thank you for your patience and contribution.-Nizil (talk) 05:19, 19 July 2018 (UTC)