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The result was: promoted by Carabinieri (talk) 23:09, 22 May 2012 (UTC)
Hüseyin Özer edit
- ... that the Turkish-British chef and restaurateur Hüseyin Özer, a former street kid, teaches at Middlesex University how to open and run successful restaurants?
- Reviewed: Helmand and Arghandab Valley Authority
Created/expanded by CeeGee (talk). Self nom at 11:32, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
- Article big and new enough. no plagiarism found. I am having trouble opening reference 3 to confirm the hook. However it does need a copyedit by someone familiar with word order. I propose a less awkward sounding hook: Graeme Bartlett (talk) 12:40, 13 May 2012 (UTC)
- alt1... that the Turkish-British chef and restaurateur Hüseyin Özer, a former street kid, teaches how to open and run successful restaurants at Middlesex University?
- How about:
- ALT2: ... that Hüseyin Özer went from living on the streets of Ankara to owning a British restaurant chain and teaching at Middlesex University?
- I agree with Graeme Bartlett that the article needs to be copyedited before this hook can run.--Carabinieri (talk) 17:24, 19 May 2012 (UTC)
I've given it a copyedit, so see if folks are satisfied. Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:27, 22 May 2012 (UTC)
It looks OK to me now, hook alt2 and alt1 are both covered by the reference 3 that I can now read OK, Good to Go. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 21:30, 22 May 2012 (UTC)
