Template:Did you know nominations/Gregg Rickman

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The result was: rejected by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) 00:45, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
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Gregg Rickman

Created by Longhornsg (talk). Self-nominated at 21:41, 13 February 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Gregg Rickman; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: No - ALT0 needs citation, as the source doesn't explicitly state he was the first envoy. ALT1 is cited.
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: None required.

Overall: See above; I think ALT1 is really interesting and a good hook, but needs to be changed so it's not paraphrasing and the article just needs a cleanup. Best of luck! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) 01:14, 15 February 2023 (UTC)