Template:Did you know nominations/Grace Nicholson

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The result was: promoted by Oceanh (talk) 08:55, 25 June 2014 (UTC)

Grace Nicholson

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Created by Penny Richards (talk). Self nominated at 16:51, 21 June 2014 (UTC).

  • New enough, long enough. Hook is interesting, but is not directly cited (all hooks have to have citations at the end of the sentence). There are also a few instances of slightly promotional language like "award-winning". --Jakob (talk) 20:47, 21 June 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the careful review. I have removed "award-winning" and cited the hook at the end of its sentence.Penny Richards (talk) 23:23, 21 June 2014 (UTC)Penny Richards
  • Thanks! Checked in my usual spots, but I'll keep digging and ask around. There are plenty of photos of Nicholson (many of them from before 1920), it's just finding one that's useable here.Penny Richards (talk) 02:26, 22 June 2014 (UTC)Penny Richards