Template:Did you know nominations/Giuseppe Garibaldi (Ney)

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:07, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

Giuseppe Garibaldi (Ney) edit

Giuseppe Garibaldi by Elisabet Ney
Giuseppe Garibaldi by Elisabet Ney
  • ... that, after composing a portrait bust of Giuseppe Garibaldi, sculptor Elisabet Ney is thought to have provided him with military intelligence during the Third Italian War of Independence? Source: "Garibaldi's short war with Austria was being waged at this time, and ... Elisabet Ney [was] his ardent sympathizer ... [She] engaged in a secret correspondence with [her] hero." (Taylor, Bride Neill (1916). Elisabet Ney, Sculptor. p. 49.)
  • Reviewed: West Kill
  • Comment: The biography by Cutrer supports the hook more explicitly, but Google has suddenly removed the pages with the relevant text from the Google Books preview; I'll get back my physical copy and add the supporting quotation to this nomination in the next few days.

Created by Bryanrutherford0 (talk). Self-nominated at 23:37, 16 January 2018 (UTC).

I don't like the piping which makes readers think that the article is about portrait bust in general. How is this?
ALT1: ... that after composing a portrait bust of Giuseppe Garibaldi (pictured), sculptor Elisabet Ney is thought to have provided him with military intelligence during the Third Italian War of Independence?
Interesting, on good sources, no copyvio obvious, image licensed and desirable to illustrate the topic. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:40, 17 January 2018 (UTC)