- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:14, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
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Gerri Major edit
Gerri Major, age 20, 1915
- ... that Gerri Major (pictured), a Harlem socialite who was called "one of the best known black women in America," was reported to be a Communist in 1928?
- ALT1:... that Gerri Major (pictured) was the first African American woman to announce programs on commercial radio?
- ALT2:... that Gerri Major (pictured) co-authored a book called Black Society which gave histories of prominent African American families from colonial times to the twentieth century?
- Reviewed: Der Mensch lebt und bestehet
Created by Delabrede (talk). Self-nominated at 17:40, 13 April 2016 (UTC).
Substantial life - details about 90 years - on good sources, offine sources accepted AGF. I like ALT1 best, but all hooks are possible. - Article: you don't need any source in the lead if it's sourced in the body and not a quote. A load of five refs doesn't help the reader ;) - I suggest to use the fair-use image for the infobox. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:54, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks Gerda Arendt; I've made the changes you suggest. ALT2 is fine with me. -- Delabrede (talk) 13:47, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you, the entry to the article is stunning now! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:56, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- ps: You could even add a bit more specific things to the lead, - and perhaps nominate for GA? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:58, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks Gerda Arendt; I've made the changes you suggest. ALT2 is fine with me. -- Delabrede (talk) 13:47, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
