Template:Did you know nominations/Frédéric de Civry
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 21:42, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
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Frédéric de Civry
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... that Frédéric de Civry was a French track cyclist who was considered an amateur in France, but a professional in England?
- Review: Robert Simpson (athlete)
Created by Harrias (talk). Self nominated at 14:02, 25 January 2015 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen in online/accessible sources. Offline hook refs AGF and cited inline. QPQ done. I would suggest tightening the hook as follows:- ALT1: ... that French track cyclist Frédéric de Civry (pictured) was considered an amateur in France, but a professional in England?
- Also, how about using the image that you uploaded? That bicycle wheel will catch everyone's attention. Yoninah (talk) 20:37, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
- I've added the image and struck the original hook. As your alt hook is only a grammatical change, not a factually different hook, I don't think there's a problem with you continuing the review, but if you'd rather leave it to someone else, that's understandable. Harrias talk 21:03, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
