Template:Did you know nominations/Female Red Guards of the Finnish Civil War
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:21, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
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Female Red Guards of the Finnish Civil War
edit- ... that over 400 female Red Guards were shot after being captured and many were raped before being executed? Source: Lindstedt, Risto (28 October 2011). Suomen Kuvalehti (in Finnish), Eerola, Jari; Eerola, Jouni (1998). Henkilötappiot Suomen sisällissodassa 1918. Turenki: Tie Tammisaareen -toimikunta. pp. 28, 159, 173. ISBN 952-91000-1-9. Pertti, Haapala, (1995). Kun yhteiskunta hajosi : Suomi 1914-1920. Helsinki: Painatuskeskus. pp. 11–14. ISBN 9513715329 (in Finnish)
- ALT1:... that over 400 female Red Guards were shot after being captured in the Finnish Civil War and many were raped before being executed?
- Reviewed: Up to date with QPQ, see here.
Improved to Good Article status by Gog the Mild (talk). Self-nominated at 20:31, 11 June 2018 (UTC).
Article is new enough (recent GA), long enough, neutral, and well referenced. No copyvio found. However, I have trouble verifying the hooks. Ref #20 which supports the text in the article is a dead link, and the only online source supplied above seem to mention only execution but not rape (as per Google translation). Please fix the dead link and provide specific text from the source(s) which mentions the rape. Please also provide a link to a specific QPQ template rather than a general list of reviews you've done. -Zanhe (talk) 23:51, 13 June 2018 (UTC)
- NB there's no requirement for sources to be available online, but it is indeed necessary to place a citation directly next to the salient facts ("over 400... were shot" and "many were raped") and helpful to give the relevant quote from the source in the citation. Sionk (talk) 16:53, 15 June 2018 (UTC)
- Of course not, but the problem is that the online sources that have been provided do not seem to support the hook, which raises questions about its credibility. -Zanhe (talk) 17:52, 15 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Zanhe: @Sionk: Fixed the deadlink. If either could kindly run the InternetArchiveBot (https://tools.wmflabs.org/iabot/) on the article and create archives for all links, thx. I'm too lazy to start a new account right now. 86.115.14.101 (talk) 20:23, 15 June 2018 (UTC)
- @86.115.14.101: Many thanks for salvaging the link. (Any idea as to why it went down in the 2 days since the GA review?)
- @Zanhe: QPQ review: Template:Did you know nominations/Danzig Street shooting The link, reference 20 in the article, is to a University of Lapland summary of the research paper. It reads in part (free translation) "Many of the surviving [women] prisoners gave accounts of rape, involving both Finnish soldiers and guards and German soldiers." (I have not referenced to the full paper on the grounds that it is effectively unverifiable.) Gog the Mild (talk) 21:17, 17 June 2018 (UTC)