Template:Did you know nominations/Emma Wiggs

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The result was: promoted by MPJ-DK 12:45, 24 September 2016 (UTC)

Emma Wiggs edit

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... that Emma Wiggs, a gold medallist in paracanoe at the 2016 Paralympics, competed at the 2012 Paralympics as a sitting volleyball player?

ALT1 ... that Emma Wiggs, a gold medallist in paracanoe at the 2016 Paralympics, competed at the 2012 Paralympics in sitting volleyball?

Reviewed: Athletic Bilbao signing policy

5x expanded by January (talk). Self-nominated at 12:35, 18 September 2016 (UTC).

Comment only January, as you think the trimmed version is too brief, it has been added as an ALT. Shorter hooks are usually better hooks. Edwardx (talk) 21:42, 18 September 2016 (UTC)

I just found that rewording slightly abrupt, and I don't think shortening a 136 character hook by 9 is a significant difference. January (talk) 21:46, 18 September 2016 (UTC)

The article is new enough, long enough (with a near 10x expansion) and within policy regarding neutrality and sourcing, with no Copyvios detected by me or by Earwig. Both hooks are interesting and ok for length and sourcing. QPQ has been met. Alansohn (talk) 16:31, 20 September 2016 (UTC)