Template:Did you know nominations/Early Lake Erie

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The result was: rejected by Harrias talk 09:34, 14 September 2014 (UTC)

Early Lake Erie

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Middle Stage of Early Lake Erie. Based on Herdendorf, 2013. Blue is full extent of the prehistoric lake with light blue for those waters of Lake Huron over the modern lake area.

  • ... that 12,000 years before present the Laurentian ice sheet melted east of Lake Erie, creating an outlet over the Niagara Escarpment?
  • Comment: last prior expansion 7 Aug. 2010

5x expanded by Chris Light (talk). Self nominated at 17:35, 4 August 2014 (UTC).

  • Review, was expanded in time. Length OK. Sourcing is not too modern but basically OK. The Hook seems to be based on "Forsyth et al from 1973" thats hoever not being mentioned in literature nor refering directly to the hook. The hook itself is rather clumsy respectively not very attractive, textwise i lack the general interest aspect. Serten (talk) 16:18, 29 August 2014 (UTC)
  • No work on this at all since nomination: nominator was notified over two weeks ago. Harrias talk 09:33, 14 September 2014 (UTC)