- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by sstflyer 06:57, 26 September 2015 (UTC)
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Cristian Bustos edit
... that Spanish footballer Cristian Bustos scored his first ever goal against Real Madrid?
2x expanded and sourced (BLP) by Royroydeb (talk). Self-nominated at 10:16, 31 July 2015 (UTC).
- All of the boxes are checked, so I'd say: Good to go. Eat me, I'm a red bean (take a huge bite)i've made a huge mess 23:20, 31 July 2015 (UTC)
- except the hook fact isn't accurate, nor is it cited in the article. According to BDFutbol, his first senior goal was scored for Valencia Mestalla in the Spanish 3rd tier five-and-a-half years earlier. The cited source for his goal against Real Madrid certainly verifies his scoring a goal, but not that it was his first ever, probably because it wasn't. Additionally, the article is still classified as a stub on the talk page.
- Nominator has inadvertently listed it as 2x expansion unsourced BLP, which it wasn't: but it is a 5x expansion, so there's no problem with that. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 15:35, 2 August 2015 (UTC)
- ALT1:
... that Spanish footballer Cristian Bustos, who signed for Indian club Mumbai City FC in 2015, has played for B-team of Valencia CF?
RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 15:58, 3 August 2015 (UTC)
- The facts in that hook are true, although the cited source(s) should appear immediately after the hook fact(s), not just at the end of the paragraph (see WP:DYK#Eligibility criteria point 3b). I'll link footballer, because not all our readers understand football to mean soccer, and add the missing comma. I'd word it "played for Valencia's B-team" rather than "played for B-team of Valencia". It's pretty dull, though: I'll leave it to others to decide if that matters.
- I've fixed an inaccuracy in the article which appeared to stem from the nominator using a translation tool on a Spanish-language source and then guessing at what the results actually meant. And I've removed no-longer-current review icons: if I shouldn't have done that, please put them back and I'll know another time. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 11:48, 5 August 2015 (UTC)
- I have now added the source after the fact. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 08:35, 11 August 2015 (UTC)
And I've added the source after the other half of the fact..... Criteria are now satisfied by ALT1, apart from whether the hook's interesting enough, which I'll leave for someone more experienced in current DYK standards to rule on. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 11:42, 13 August 2015 (UTC)
- Meh... the hook is pretty boring to be honest. How about something like the following? Prioryman (talk) 11:48, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that the Spanish footballer Cristian Bustos has moved to India to play for Mumbai City FC after playing over 270 games for six Spanish clubs?
- Meh... the hook is pretty boring to be honest. How about something like the following? Prioryman (talk) 11:48, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
- I have now added the source after the fact. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 08:35, 11 August 2015 (UTC)
- Ok, its good. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 16:43, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
- Full review needed now that hook is set. User:Royroydeb, note that a QPQ will be require; you'll want to supply one as soon as possible so as not to delay the nomination further. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:54, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
- Template:Did you know nominations/You Love Me (Melissa Steel song) -QPQ done. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 14:23, 15 September 2015 (UTC)
