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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:58, 9 May 2017 (UTC)

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Cornell Pulpwood Stacker
Cornell Pulpwood Stacker

(hook is 129 characters) "Height 175 ft ... Angle 45 degrees ... Workers make repairs using a catwalk on the upper side of the left truss frame."A Big Piece of History

Created by Maile66 (talk). Self-nominated at 17:38, 9 April 2017 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: 3363 characters (570 words) "readable prose size". Article created by Maile66 on April 9, 2017. Earwig's Copyvio Detector: 17.4 %. NearEMPTiness (talk) 21:20, 12 April 2017 (UTC)

  • Returning to Nominations page for reconsideration of the hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:30, 27 April 2017 (UTC)
@Maile66: The hook should be explained or rephrased, please, to be more accurate. Please check Cornell Pulpwood Stacker and What went wrong? for other reviewers' comments. I, propose the following alternatives:
  • ALT 1... that a steep catwalk leads to the top of the 175-foot (53 m) high Cornell Pulpwood Stacker (pictured)? Reference: "Height 175 ft ... Angle 45 degrees ... Workers make repairs using a catwalk on the upper side of the left truss frame."A Big Piece of History
  • ALT 2... that workers can climb onto the 175-foot (53 m) high Cornell Pulpwood Stacker (pictured) using a steep catwalk? Reference: "Height 175 ft ... Angle 45 degrees ... Workers make repairs using a catwalk on the upper side of the left truss frame."A Big Piece of History — Preceding unsigned comment added by NearEMPTiness (talk • contribs) 9:46, 29 April 2017 (UTC)
Whatever you think works is OK. — Maile (talk) 17:29, 29 April 2017 (UTC)

Let's go for ALT 1, as nobody objected so far. NearEMPTiness (talk) 10:42, 30 April 2017 (UTC)


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