Template:Did you know nominations/Cleveland Rosenblums

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:00, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

Cleveland Rosenblums

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Max Rosenblum

  • ... that the Cleveland Rosenblums, owned by department store owner Max Rosenblum (pictured), won the first championship of the newly formed American Basketball League in 1926?

Created/expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 01:14, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

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  • Overall, quite strong, but needs to be shored up in a few spots. Then should be good to go. Plot Spoiler (talk) 22:43, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
  • I'll continuing working on improving it over the next couple days, but I think that your concerns have been addressed. I also still need to do a QPQ review, and should be able to that in the next day. Cbl62 (talk) 00:52, 4 October 2011 (UTC)
  • Should be ready to go now. Cbl62 (talk) 05:43, 4 October 2011 (UTC)
Yep, should be good to go. Also slightly expanded the lede. You may want to consider doing so further. Plot Spoiler (talk) 16:30, 4 October 2011 (UTC)