Template:Did you know nominations/Chandro Tomar

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 10:44, 4 April 2015 (UTC)

Chandro Tomar

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  • ... that Chandro Tomar, an octogenarian from Johri, has attained fame as an accomplished shooter with 25 national championships and is believed to be the oldest woman sharpshooter in the world?

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self nominated at 05:19, 11 March 2015 (UTC).

  • Well, it's long enough and it's new enough, but it's not neutral enough. I've made a sample edit so you can have an idea of what I think needs to be done--and I am going to make an edit to the lead as well. So please go through and tweak this, so we can get it up quickly. Drmies (talk) 02:32, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
  • Thanks @Drmies:. I got your point and made some more editing. I hope it is fine now.--Nvvchar. 03:56, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
  • Nvvchar, please see my recent edits; I left a few questions in "explain" templates. Mind you that I haven't looked at the sourcing yet. Thanks, Drmies (talk) 01:23, 17 March 2015 (UTC)
  • @Drmies:I have addressed the issues.--Nvvchar. 13:03, 17 March 2015 (UTC)
  • Editor hadn't really addressed them, but it's taken care of now. Drmies (talk) 02:41, 4 April 2015 (UTC)