Template:Did you know nominations/Cathy Whims

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 01:01, 5 May 2023 (UTC)

Cathy Whims

Improved to Good Article status by Another Believer (talk) and Etriusus (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 19:06, 16 April 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Cathy Whims; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • This is a recent GA, its long enough, its well written, pretty neutral (no negative reviews?) and it has lots of good references. The hook is long enough although "that Cathy Whims has opened several restaurants in Portland, Oregon including... could be said as "that Cathy Whims restaurants in Portland, Oregon include". Willing to return if another hook is suggested but I think this is GTG. Well done. Victuallers (talk) 10:41, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
Had a 2nd thought and replaced "dubbed" with "described". "Dubbed" implies that it is a nickname. This might be what is desired but I couldnt see evidence for it being an established nickname. Victuallers (talk) 16:12, 18 April 2023 (UTC)