Template:Did you know nominations/Catherine G. Williams

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~~... that award-winning Iowa government social worker Catherine G. Williams started out as a tap dancer?~~

Source: Reagen, Michael V. (May 25, 2020). "Iowa lost an icon with the death of Catherine Willliams, 105". Iowa Capital Dispatch. Retrieved June 25, 2024.

Created by SL93 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 408 past nominations.

SL93 (talk) 02:30, 25 June 2024 (UTC).

Hi SL93, review follows: article created 25 June and exceeds minimum length; article is well written (I made some minor changes, feel free to revert if you want); article is cited inline throughout to reliable sources for the content cited (I don't think the claims cited to the funeral home exceed that allowed by WP:ABOUTSELF); I didn't pick up anything too worrying on a check for close paraphrasing (NB: Earwig is thrown off by the long quote and proper names); hook is interesting enough for me, mentioned in the article and checks out to source cited; a QPQ has been done. I have one query regarding the hook "award-winning" is listed at Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch, I wonder if "... that Iowa Social Worker of the Year" Catherine...) might be a good way to combine award-winning, location and occupation? Let me know - Dumelow (talk) 09:48, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Dumelow I would be fine with just removing award-winning. While the award is significant, it's nowhere near as significant as an award with an article like the Iowa Women's Hall of Fame. ALTa ... that Iowa government social worker Catherine G. Williams started out as a tap dancer? SL93 (talk) 21:29, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

No problem, ALTa good to go - Dumelow (talk) 07:36, 28 June 2024 (UTC)