Template:Did you know nominations/Cardiff Ely bread riots

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 18:39, 11 March 2020 (UTC)

Cardiff Ely bread riots

Created/expanded by Kosack (talk). Self-nominated at 08:43, 5 March 2020 (UTC).

  • Date and length fine. I do like the hook and would be happy to approve it, however @Kosack: could I ask if the "price of bread" claim could be more clear in the article before I can approve it? QPQ is needed. No close paraphrasing. Once these are done, ping me and I'll take another look? The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 12:13, 5 March 2020 (UTC)
  • @The C of E: I've edited the hook slightly, changing price to sale of bread, to better reflect the article as adding a price angle to the prose would probably be pushing the boundaries of the sources. QPQ added also. Kosack (talk) 21:04, 8 March 2020 (UTC)