- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:09, 3 August 2017 (UTC)
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Céleste Mogador edit
- ... that Céleste Mogador may have been the inspiration for the title character in Georges Bizet's opera Carmen? Source: Baim, Jo (2007). Tango: Creation of a Cultural Icon, page 138
- Reviewed: Liriomyza huidobrensis
Created by Big iron (talk). Self-nominated at 15:18, 21 July 2017 (UTC).
This entry is new enough (nominated on day of creation) and long enough (>1500 characters per DYK Check). It is mostly within policy, but I notice a couple of instances of close paraphrasing where the wording has only been superficially modified from the original ("He became the French consul..." and "Some sources suggest that she may have been the inspiration..."); in an article this brief, it should be easy to reword these. I don't speak French, but if those sources have any similar issues, we should fix those. The hook is short enough, accurate, neutral, cited and highly interesting. QPQ done. We should be good to go once we address the close paraphrasing. EricEnfermero (Talk) 07:14, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- I have done some rewording of the article based on your comments. --Big_iron (talk) 12:44, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
Close paraphrasing addressed. Hook is cited, article is new, QPQ done, and layout seems right. For future reference, please save Earwig's Copyvio Detector. It's a great tool to see if you need to rephrase your material. Thanks a lot! MX (✉ • ✎) 19:05, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
- Sorry - intended to come back to this today, but it looks like it's all done. EricEnfermero (Talk) 20:09, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
