Template:Did you know nominations/Bonnie Sveen

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 10:29, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Bonnie Sveen edit

Moved to mainspace by JuneGloom07 (talk). Self-nominated at 00:40, 23 April 2016 (UTC).

  • for the original hook, which is much more interesting in my opinion. The fact is not explicitly stated in the article, but it is clearly stated with citations that she played character A and later character B in the same show. The article was moved to mainspace on 22 April, is long enough and neutral with suitable references. There doesn't appear to be any close paraphrasing. QPQ is done. 97198 (talk) 12:10, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
  • I've trimmed "actress" from the hook, as "played" makes it redundant. You could trim "Australian" as it is an Australian soap, so hardly a remarkable fact! Edwardx (talk) 17:46, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Hi, I came by to promote this, and I've read the article a few times, but I don't see the two roles that she played in the soap. All I see is Ricky. Could you point me to the second role? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 06:26, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
  • It's in the first paragraph of the Career section, just before the Spartacus sentence. - JuneGloom07 Talk 03:30, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Oh, great, now I see it! I added a few more words from the source. Restoring tick per 97198's review. Yoninah (talk) 10:28, 27 April 2016 (UTC)