Template:Did you know nominations/Beit Qad

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:27, 4 November 2016 (UTC)

Beit Qad edit

  • ... that the modern Palestinian village of Beit Qad is associated with the biblical Israeli town of Beth Ekad?

Created by Bolter21 (talk), Huldra (talk), and Zero0000 (talk). Nominated by Bolter21 (talk) at 11:32, 22 October 2016 (UTC).

  • A decent article, though it had rather a lot of typos for my liking (please make sure you proof-read before you submit to DYK; I've fixed them myself). It's new enough, long enough, well sourced (AGF for offline sources) and neutrally written. I think the hook could be improved; as far as I know, doesn't "Israeli" (in English at least) refer to the modern country, not the ancient kingdom? Also, it's not clear from 2 Kings 10:14 whether Beth Ekad was a town or just a locality (the King James version translates Beth Eked as "shearing house"). I'd suggest the following alternative hook. Prioryman (talk) 12:06, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
  • ALT1:... that the modern Palestinian village of Beit Qad is associated with the biblical locality of Beth Ekad, mentioned in the Book of Kings as the site of a massacre?
  • Second hook is fine, I didn't base the words on the text it self, but on what is written in the sources.--Bolter21 (talk to me) 12:58, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
  • OK, let's go with ALT1 then. Prioryman (talk) 20:50, 29 October 2016 (UTC)