- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:52, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
Bagsværd Church edit
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- ... that Bagsværd Church (pictured) designed by Danish architect Jørn Utzon has a vault made from concrete shells spanning 17 metres (56 ft)?
- Reviewed: Alloxylon pinnatum
Created/expanded by Elekhh (talk), Ipigott (talk). Nominated by Elekhh (talk) at 05:48, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
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Nicely written article. I accepted the church's website as a reliable source for the hook fact as the church should be a reliable source for the dimensions of its own building (I seem to recall this question raised in other church-related DYKs). I have modified the hook slightly ("that Bagsværd Church (pictured) designed by Danish architect Jørn Utzon has a concrete shell vault spanning 17 metres (56 ft)" to "that Bagsværd Church (pictured) designed by Danish architect Jørn Utzon has a vault made from concrete shells spanning 17 metres (56 ft)") because both the article and the source refer to plural shells, and the original hook sounded like it was a single shell. BabelStone (talk) 00:43, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
