- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 10:30, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
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Amanda Lim edit
... that Singaporean swimmer Amanda Lim won the women's 50 metre freestyle event at the last three Southeast Asian Games?
- Reviewed: Brian Hill (swimmer)
Created by Ianblair23 (talk). Self nominated at 03:36, 6 October 2014 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough, well cited, QPQ noted. Congratulations on a nice article and lots of work. However the suggested hook is tricky to verify. It's not clear that any single cited sentence somewhere in the article states the information. Since the individual wins are stated and cited, how about this as an alternative?
- ALT 1 ... that Singaporean swimmer Amanda Lim won the women's 50 metre freestyle event in the 2009, 2011 and 2013 Southeast Asian Games? Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 19:50, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks Mary for the review. I am happy with ALT1. I have also added links to the three articles. -- Ianblair23 (talk) 23:58, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
Great! In that case, I think it's good to go. I've struck the original hook. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 02:11, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks Mary for the review. I am happy with ALT1. I have also added links to the three articles. -- Ianblair23 (talk) 23:58, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
