Template:Did you know nominations/Alice Coomaraswamy

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 16:47, 24 October 2015 (UTC)

Alice Coomeraswamy edit

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Ratan Devi in Manhattan

... that Alice Richardson from Yorkshire went to India and returned as Ratan Devi (pictured)?

ALT1:... that occultist Alistair Crowley said he made Alice Coomaraswamy (pictured) pregnant using "sex-magic"?
Reviewed: QPQ = 3 of 8 Masked fruiteater
Comment: moved to main space on 13 October

Created by Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) (talk), 7&6=thirteen, (talk), Rich Farmbrough (talk), and Victuallers (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 15:54, 20 October 2015 (UTC).

Review

QPQ by Victuallers

Eligibility

Article moved from User:Richard Arthur Norton (1958- )/Alice Coomaraswamy on October 13, 2015 and is currently 2671 characters (0 words) "readable prose size"
Article is NPOV, currently stable, no edit wars, no dispute tags

Sourcing

Every paragraph sourced inline, online (some of it by subscription only)
No bare URLs, and no external links used as inline sources

Hook

First hook is 77 characters, stated in the article and sourced
ALT 1 is 90 characters, stated in the article and sourced

Image

Image used is in the article and freely licensed on Commons

Tools

Duplication Detector on all online sources found no copyvio or close paraphrasing.

This one is good to go, with both hooks acceptable. I prefer ALT1, because it is so quirky. — Maile (talk) 17:50, 20 October 2015 (UTC)