Template:Did you know nominations/Alex Valencia

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 08:55, 28 April 2013 (UTC).

Alex Valencia

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Alex Valencia warming up for Odd Grenland in 2009

5x expanded by Mentoz86 (talk). Self nominated at 13:37, 12 April 2013 (UTC).

  • Article is at 5x expanded, image is good, hook seems to be alright (given that I can't read Norwegian). However, the article has bare links in its citations. These need to be converted to 'proper' references. It's also apparant that the writer has a limited command over the English language. The article also needs a good copyedit, as a consequence of that.—♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 21:54, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
  • My English aint that bad is it? :P I have fixed the bare URL's, and read through the article and copyedited. Will read through one more time later today, to see if it is anything I missed. Mentoz86 (talk) 01:57, 26 April 2013 (UTC)
  • I've now copyedited the article throughout. I hope it is good enough, if not please let me know what I can improve. Mentoz86 (talk) 13:47, 26 April 2013 (UTC)

It's good enough. —♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 15:43, 27 April 2013 (UTC)