Template:Did you know nominations/Album covers of Blue Note Records

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 00:35, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Album covers of Blue Note Records

  • Reviewed:
  • Comment: Including two disagreeing sources for ALT1 because there seems to be no consensus on how many covers Miles designed, other that they are in the multiple hundreds. I am personally more drawn to ALT1 than I am the original hook, given that the original cannot be supplemented by free-use images. Feel free to alter the hooks as well.
Created by Joeyquism (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Joeyquism (talk) 05:34, 10 June 2024 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Hi Joey! came here after finding this article from discord. Sources look good, with reliable sources and authors with good creds. Spotchecked a few of them (refer to Special:PermanentLink/1229691544), [3] [13], [33], [69] and found no issues with plagiarism or verifiability (although I would tone down with the quotations if you want to bring it to GA). No need for a QPQ. Wrt hookiness, I don't really vibe with both hooks - the second is wordy, and the first depends on whether people know Andy Warhol. Perhaps you can spin a hook from the third paragraph of the lead? PSA 🏕️🪐 (please make some noise...) 01:25, 20 June 2024 (UTC)

Hi PSA - thank you for the review! I agree with your point that ALT0 requires prior knowledge, though I'm not sure that I agree ALT1 is wordy other than the usage of the word "jazz" twice. As a replacement, how about the following:
Perhaps that's more concise? I also took your suggestion of spinning a hook from the third paragraph:
...or some other variation? Let me know what you think. For your point regarding quotations, I am assuming you mean the quotations in the reception section, but please correct me if I'm wrong. I'll get to reducing the quotation usage as soon as I can. Thanks again! joeyquism (talk) 02:14, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
  • @PSA: Does the above address your concerns, as is this approved? If not, what else needs to be done? Z1720 (talk) 15:54, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
  • @Z1720: Is it possible to get further movement on this without PSA? Pinging them again just in case, though if they don't respond here, I'll notify them on the Discord server. joeyquism (talk) 22:56, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
  • @Joeyquism:, so sorry. Real life got in the way (on-the-job training kept me busy). I like ALT2 by sevenfold, and I see you did your best with reducing the quotations, so I feel confident in approving this. PSA 🏕️🪐 (please make some noise...) 00:23, 2 July 2024 (UTC)