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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 10:16, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

Advayataraka Upanishad edit

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~~... that according to the Advayataraka Upanishad, transcendence is aroused when Kundalini rises from Muladharachakra via Sushumna to the Brahmarandhra (where soul dwells)?~~
ALT: ... that the Advayataraka Upanishad defines a guru (teacher) as one who disperses darkness?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Balliet Run

Created by Nvvchar (talk), Redtigerxyz (talk). Nominated by Nvvchar (talk) at 02:20, 19 January 2015 (UTC).

Aroused has an, um, odd connotation here, but I lack the knowledge to fix it. EEng (talk) 04:11, 8 February 2015 (UTC)
- EEng, arouse as used in the sentence means: "To cause (someone/thing) to be active, attentive, or excited". It does not only mean sexual arousal. Redtigerxyz ^Talk 18:20, 8 February 2015 (UTC)

I understand that, but I wonder whether achieved, initiated, summoned, invoked, awakened might draw fewer snickers. EEng (talk) 18:26, 8 February 2015 (UTC)

EEng, the term "arouse" is used in this context generally. [1] --Redtigerxyz ^Talk 11:05, 9 February 2015 (UTC)

I defer to your judgment. EEng (talk) 11:57, 9 February 2015 (UTC)

Full reviewed needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:13, 13 February 2015 (UTC)

Escaped notice. Now, fixed disambiguation for Transcendence.--Nvvchar. 09:47, 6 March 2015 (UTC)

New enough, long enough, well referenced, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen. I find the first hook to be difficult to follow, and do not see the part about Kundalini rising in footnote 5. ALT1 is much easier to understand, and interesting, too. ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:30, 15 March 2015 (UTC)