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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 13:12, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Actinopyga echinites edit

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Actinopyga echinites

~~... that brownfish is harvested commercially for food over most of its range?~~ Source: "This species is commercially exploited throughout its range"

Reviewed: Gilles Bouchard

5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 06:13, 24 October 2018 (UTC).

Article was expanded fivefold within the last seven days, is over the required prose size and has no copyvio concerns. The hook has an inline citation to a reliable source, the image appears to be suitably licensed. User has supplied a QPQ review, good to go. Kosack (talk) 20:03, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Hi, I came by to promote this to a non-image slot (the image is pretty dark), but I don't find the hook very hooky. Yoninah (talk) 23:38, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

@Yoninah: How about:-

ALT1 ... that the brownfish is harvested commercially over most of its range despite being described by the IUCN as a vulnerable species? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:12, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

Yes, thank you! Additional hook fact verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Kosack. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 13:01, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

Thanks. I have added "the" to the hook because it seemed gramatically awkward. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:40, 29 November 2018 (UTC)