Talk:World of Final Fantasy VIII/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Jinnai in topic GA Reassessment
GA Reassessment
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Reading the article. I will update this when done. Updated.
陣内Jinnai 22:22, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- Fails WP:LEAD many of those links in the lead could be removed, specifically everyone in the first paragraph. Tty and find a way to incorperate the sales data and ranking into the body as well so those links can be removed.
The text looks like it could use some cleanup as well. A lot of vague terms are used.
- Fails WP:LEAD many of those links in the lead could be removed, specifically everyone in the first paragraph. Tty and find a way to incorperate the sales data and ranking into the body as well so those links can be removed.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- OR and other specific mentions about the world i cited. In addition:
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
Ref 6 - publisher needs updating- Done. --PresN 17:41, 14 November 2009 (UTC)
- Ref 31, 32. 34 & 35 - why are they RSes?
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- Very little on the game's politics which play a central role in the game. There are bits and pieces scattered throughout, but nothing substantial i'd expect when reading an article about "The World of XXX".
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Appears there might be one atm between Dream Focus and Kung Fu Man.
- One reversion 3 days before is an edit war? --PresN 17:31, 14 November 2009 (UTC)
- Appears there might be one atm between Dream Focus and Kung Fu Man.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- File:FFVIII worldmap.png needs to have its copyright staus clarified. There are disputing copyright tags.
- Resolved- I see what the user was trying to do, but since it's a derivative work of a copyrighted image, he can't add a copyleft criteria to his version, as he didn't have any rights over it in the first place. It doesn't need to be GNU'd to allow further derivative works, since he/the future person can't claim copyright in the first place. --PresN 17:37, 14 November 2009 (UTC)
- Ok. Still needs info on why a copyright-free version can't be used. Possibly consider using a template.陣内Jinnai 18:07, 14 November 2009 (UTC)
- Resolved- I see what the user was trying to do, but since it's a derivative work of a copyrighted image, he can't add a copyleft criteria to his version, as he didn't have any rights over it in the first place. It doesn't need to be GNU'd to allow further derivative works, since he/the future person can't claim copyright in the first place. --PresN 17:37, 14 November 2009 (UTC)
- File:FFVIII worldmap.png needs to have its copyright staus clarified. There are disputing copyright tags.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- holding until some of the issues are resolved or 1 week of no major activity.陣内Jinnai 23:15, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: