Talk:Wolfram von Richthofen/GA1

I have quickfailed this GA, it has a number of uncited paragraphs and doesn't meet criteria 2b., it is also over 15,000 words in length, and my assessment is that it doesn't meet 3b. due to a significant amount of unnecessary detail. Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 22:27, 25 December 2015 (UTC)