Talk:Williamsport Outlaws

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Oknazevad in topic Section removed (rivalries)

Section removed (rivalries)

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There were a few sentences after the Season-by-Season record which was apparently intended to be a new section on the Outlaws alleged rivalry with the Danbury Whalers. I'm removing them primarily because the number of spelling and grammar errors in so few sentences is unbelievable. ("There frist"? Try "their first".) Second, I don't think 5 games (at the time of writing) constitutes a rivalry. And finally, the Outlaws will likely favor a rivalry with the Brooklyn Aviators. (Brooklyn is less than half the distance from the Outlaws that Danbury is.) Elsquared (talk) 08:49, 11 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Agreed. Completely OR, and incredibly poorly written. oknazevad (talk) 05:34, 13 December 2011 (UTC)Reply