Talk:Weaves (EP)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 14:45, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm MarioSoulTruthFan and I will be reviewing this article over the next days, please hold on any fixes until I say so. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:45, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• Reference for Indie pop genre? Should also be in the composition
  • Citation in composition section editorEهեইдအ😎 03:40, 13 July 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• the other third having production from David Newfeld → re-word
  • Fixed editorEهեইдအ😎 03:15, 14 July 2016 (UTC)
• Should make a reference of each single, don' say only "EP was promoted with four singles,"
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:15, 14 July 2016 (UTC)
• The same goes for the music videos and do you know the name of the tour?
  • The source I cited for the tour didn't really give the name of the tour, so I can't say. Named the music videos also editorEهեইдအ😎 03:15, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

Production and composition

• Flawless.

Promotion

• "as the magazine described" → remove this part
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
• "strong voice." → end quote and then full stop.
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)

Critical reception

• "Praises included the use and combination of many styles" → sounds too informal
  • Fixed editorEهեইдအ😎 03:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
• "...band." → end quote and then full stop.
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
• "...chaos." → same as previous
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
• Should mention Now magazine on the review part as well as Exclaim.ca just like the other magazines.
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)

Track listing

• All songs written and composed by Jasmyn Burke and Morgan Waters. → All songs written by Jasmyn Burke and Morgan Waters and produced by them excepted when noted. + add a source
  • Burke didn't produce any of the tracks, so I'm not going to add "produced by them excepted when noted" in this case. Also added source.

Sorry, my bad. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:20, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

• Use {{spaced ndash}}
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:39, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
• Instead of "source" → Credits adapted from liner notes of Weaves (EP):
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:39, 13 July 2016 (UTC)

Release history

Why two sources?

• They're showing the album had both a CD and digital release. editorEهեইдအ😎 03:15, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

References

• Fine.

Overall GA review

@EditorE: I've completed the review, I'll put it on hold for a week, once you have adressed the issues I raised please ping me.

• @MarioSoulTruthFan: All comments have been addressed. These reviews have been great and very useful in improving my other content as well.

Thanks, glad to see that I'm doing a difference here and there. Passing MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:35, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

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