Talk:Wave 1/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Carbrera in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:58, 1 June 2016 (UTC)Reply


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Lead

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Background and composition

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  • Again, add the release year for the album Galactic Melt please
    • It's there, read the first sentence again: "Maintaining the bright and danceable feel from Com Truise's 2011 debut studio album Galactic Melt"
  • Rest looks great! :)

Tracks

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  • I think a better title for this section would be "Composition" or "Songs"; but I guess this is just personal preference

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Promotion and release

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  • Nada :)

Critical reception

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  • Reword first sentence to "Wave 1 received positive reviews from music critics, with the EP..."
  • State what Metacritic's score means; elaborate further
  • "Pitchfork Media's Paul Thompson noted that the producer's attention to perfecting every detail instead of inventing new ideas on Wave 1 caused the album to lack any sort of feeling, but he concluded that "by burrowing down into a few key sounds rather than stiffly approximating a dozen-plus, the intermittently funky, unshakably finicky Wave 1 is a mostly welcome return."[6]" --> I'm not exactly sure what the middle of the sentence is trying to convey; could you reword this as well? It's rather as long as well; you could likely get the same message across without including the entirety of the quote

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Tracklist

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Charts

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  • Looks good

Other notes

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End of GA Review:

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A good article with some minor issues that have been explained above. I will place the article on hold for seven days to allow for changes. Please alert me when the issues are taken care of; thanks a lot! Carbrera (talk) 02:10, 3 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Great work @EditorE:! Definitely will be passing now. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 16:57, 4 June 2016 (UTC)Reply