Talk:Unrequited (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 18:34, 1 January 2013 (UTC)

I will be performing a review later today. TBrandley ^{(what's up)} 18:34, 1 January 2013 (UTC)

• "aired" perhaps "originally aired"?

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

• Upon linking "Monster-of-the-Week", please do not include the quotation marks

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

• Check the lead's first paragraph usage of "episode" at the near beginning of their first sentences, and perhaps replace some with different words

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

• "the mysterious murder of a U.S. Army Lieutenant General has Mulder and Scully racing against the clock to stop a seemingly unstoppable and invisible assassin" how can you assure that all of that sentence represents a neutral point of view, and not personal analysis.

  I believe I rewrote this adequately.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

• "American POW's still being kept in Vietnam" that provides a link to Vietnam War POW/MIA issue, but it is not publicly visible generally, so per WP:EASTEREGG, I would suggest stating the Vietnam War in the article's context, place the link there, hence why you should then removing the Easter egg link

  I tried to move it down. The wording is still different, but I feel it is now in a more appropriate place.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

• The same seems to go for "mark their kills"

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

• "warehouse, duly" unnecessary comma?

  Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

• In the production section, link "Jericho Park" per WP:UNDERLINK

  Unfortunately, the page does not exist.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

• Could you dig up some information about the British broadcast in the reception section, which would be beneficent to the article

  I found the airdate, but that's really all. It's better than nothing, I guess.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

• "Wanting to Believe: A Critical Guide to The X-Files, Millennium & The Lone Gunmen" bibliographical works should be in italics per WP:ITALICS

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

TBrandley ^{(what's up)} 03:24, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. How does it look now?--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:37, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.