Talk:United Talent Agency/Archives/2022

Latest comment: 4 years ago by EWChristine in topic Lead rewrite tag

Question about warning template

Hello! I work for Executive Writing, and as part of my consultancy work, I work with United Talent Agency. This page was flagged in September 2018, and in the time since the article has changed significantly. You can view the page as it was in 2018 here. In June of this year another editor removed sections they identified as "advertising". The rest of the page seems to me well-sourced, neutral, and relevant, so I believe the warning template is out-of-date and should be removed.

I’d appreciate any help and guidance. I believe I've disclosed my conflict of interest appropriately. Thank you in advance for any help. EWChristine (talk) 21:35, 27 January 2020 (UTC)

Proposed Merger

Hello. I work for Executive Writing, and as part of my consultancy, I work with United Talent Agency. I am hoping someone will be willing to take a look at the N.S. Bienstock page to help determine if it should be merged to direct readers to the United Talent Agency page. United Talent Agency’s acquisition of N.S. Bienstock was widely reported in the press when it occurred in early 2014. This acquisition is already referenced and sourced on the United Talent Agency page. You can see coverage of the initial acquisition here. THE N.S. Bienstock brand has since retired and is known now as UTA News & Broadcasting. This, too, is noted on the UTA page. Additionally, the N.S. Bienstock brand retirement can be documented by the fact that the entity no longer has an independent website. I believe the N.S. Bienstock page should be merged and simply refer readers to the United Talent Agency page, which already reflects the retirement of the NSB/shift to UTA News & Broadcast, but am looking for guidance from editors.

I believe I've disclosed my conflict of interest appropriately. Thank you in advance for your help. EWChristine (talk) 22:00, 29 January 2020 (UTC)

Lead rewrite tag

The lead as written does not properly summarize the article, and could probably be expanded in the process of a rewrite. signed, Rosguill talk 20:15, 30 January 2020 (UTC)

Hello, I work for Executive Writing, and as part of my consultancy work, I work with United Talent Agency. This page was flagged in January 2019 as having a lead section that may need to be rewritten. @Rosguill:, can you please give us guidance why you flagged the page? I am happy to work with you to fix the page to your satisfaction to remove the flag. Thank you for your help. EWChristine (talk) 15:59, 9 April 2020 (UTC)