Talk:Tyson Jost/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 23:02, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:02, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

• Link British Columbia in the lead. Done
• No need to relink St. Albert in the early life section. Done
• No need to write out Canada, already implied by city and province. Done
• Lower caps for colour. Done
• "the Everett Silvertips 7th overall" Add "at" after Silvertips. Done
• Ref 5 has an author. Done
• You should add the BCHL acronym after the first time you mention it, so you can use the acronym for all mentions of the league afterwards. Done

• Ditto for BCMML. Done

• "In his first, and only," Don't need the commas. Done
• "45 points in 46 games" Source says "45 points in 44 games". Done

• Any details on his time with UND? Season results and (conference) awards at least?
• I should've kept reading on.
• UND's loss to Boston U in the tournament should be mentioned before saying he left the school. Done

• You can link NCAA Division I. Done
• MOS:NUM for 3. Done

Saving for now. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:33, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

• Avoid starting consecutive sentences with the same word. Done
• Ref 20 missing an author. Done
• Publisher needed for ref 22. Done
• "After attending the Avalanche's training camp, Jost was named to their opening night roster to begin the 2019–20 season." Maybe reword this so it doesn't look like the same sentence from the paragraph above. Done
• Ref 31 needs a publisher. Done
• His World Challenge MVP is worth mentioning. Done
• Ref 36 needs a publisher. Done
• Ref 37 is dead. Done
• Ref 40 has an agency you can add to the template. Done
• North Dakota Fighting Hawks can be written out on the stats section. Done
• Reference column of the awards table needs a name. Done
• Optional, but you can make ref 1's title not in all-caps. Done
• Mention something in the lead about his professional career. Done

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:18, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

Nova Crystallis, thanks for the review. I hope I've addressed all the issues. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:55, 20 May 2020 (UTC)