Talk:Typhoon Oliwa/GA1

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Reviewer: Jason Rees (talk) 22:41, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

Prior to that time, Oliwa co-existed with a weak tropical cyclone that formed in a similar location in the southern hemisphere.

Whilst i know this to be true, it would be nice to try and ID which SPAC cyclone it was. Also i would change the Southern hemipshere to South Pacific and change link it off to the season.

I would like to see some more impact from Japan There seems to be quite a bit in on Google - Also see if theirs anything in the HKOs report for the season.

Bar that everything else seems to be in order.Jason Rees (talk) 22:41, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

Since all my comments have been addressed im happy to pass this article